Change in our thriller

We have decided to alter our thriller marginally instead of having two sets one of the secretaries office and one of the PIs office we have just cut it down so we just have the PIs office therefore we will save time and money which would be used making two sets. Having just the one set will enable us to do it more thoroughly concentrating on the extravagant Mise-en-scene which is integral to our thriller. The fact that we are going to have many close-ups on the materials such as cigars in the office makes the filming much easier and more accessible.  Then it would be spending time on building two sets. Seeing as we are not going to have a secretary’s office the first scene where we see the secretary typing at her desk has been discarded. But we have not taken the role of the secretary’s out of our thriller as you can see from the photographic storyboard she appears at the end as well as this in regard to diegetic sound we will hear her voice in the background when the femme fatale is asking to see the detective. We will then see the detective’s reaction at hearing her voice. This will therefore change our storyboard and our narrative action as well as our narrative plot.